2017年大學入學測驗全國1卷英語作文範文及賞析一
2017年大學入學測驗全國1卷英語作文範文及賞析一
Dear Ieslie,
As scheduled, we will have a Chinese lesson next weekend idering our students are preparing for their final exam,I suggest we have the lesson in the park near our school.
The mainly course of our class is to learn the poem of Tang 's universally acknowledged that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture. A large number of talent poets showed their view about the society and expressed their satisfaction with the beauty of our motherland. You can broaden your horizon and have a better understanding of our colorful culture through this study.
Knowing the history of Tang Dynasty is better for you before having class. It's the society that creates the brilliant poem.
Yours
Li Hua.
點評:本文要點覆蓋較全面,文章結構清晰,語法錯誤較少,長短句運用合理,結合了簡單句同時運用了較多的複雜句式,如主語從句It’s universally acknowledged that…,強調句型It's the society that…非謂語結構作狀語Considering our students are preparing for…等等;同時恰當使用了一定的高級詞彙如solid foundation,broaden one’s horizons等。
建議:1 文章要點方面,建議時間更精確些,比如下週周几几點到幾點;2 語法方面,注意細節語法的錯誤,比如mainly改成main,poem改成poems等。
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