2017年大學入學測驗全國1卷英語作文範文及賞析二
2017年大學入學測驗全國1卷英語作文範文及賞析二
Dear Lesile
How are you? I have learnt your progress in your Chinese with my help and your hard work. I am writing to tell the plan that what should you do in advance.
First, let's make it at eight o'clock in school library. We can consulted a number of books about the subject there. Second, the next theme is about Chinese culture especially the Tang poems that are full of history and act. I believe you will be attractive once you put your heart. Third I need you to perpare some work. The Tang poems are based on the Tang dynasty
so you should to look through the history and great happening.
As the saying goes no pains, no gains. Chinese is so beautiful and difficult that you need be involved sincerely. I am looking forward to starting our study.
Yours,
Li Hua
點評:本文要點覆蓋較全面,文章結構較清晰,有恰當的銜接詞使用,長短句運用較合理;同時恰當使用了一定的常用句式及諺語,如as the saying goes,no pains,no gains等。
建議:1 文章要點方面,建議時間更精確些,比如具體是哪一週哪一天的8點;2 語法方面,注意細節語法的錯誤,如can consulted改成can consult等;3 邏輯方面,注意詞和詞之間的單配邏輯,如you will be attractive once you…邏輯上不是很通順;4 單詞拼寫上,注意拼寫的準確性,如perpare改成prepare等。
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