At the seaside300字作文
My family and I went to the seaside dad went fishing in the mum unber the read a book. My uncle ate ice consins ate brothers nade a sters basked on the sunny went swimming in the and I played were very happy.
修改後:
My family and I went to the seaside. My dad went fishing in the sea. My mum stayed underthe umbrella. She read a book. My uncle ate an ice cream. My consins ate bread. My brothers made a sandcastle. Mysisters bathed on the sunny beach. Mike went swimming in the sea. Kate and I played football. We were very happy.
修改老師:Crystal 老師
六年級:呂曉燕
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The false illiterate2000字
Onewintermorning,inasmallbusstationwaspackedwithmen,womenandchildren.Dependontherailingofthesignclearlymarked""motherandsongetonthebus.Standhereandnotholdingthechild'smother,ranisafewmen.Therealmotherbepushedaside.Emaciatedmotherscarf,dr...
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六年級英語作文:選擇朋友400字
Amanwhoiscarefulinchoosingfriendswillcertainlyderivebenefitfromthem.Why?Becausetherearemorefalsefriendsthanrealonesinthisworld.Tohaveonerealfriendsisbetterthanahundredfalseones.Friendswhoflatteryoutoyourfacearenottruefriends.Wemustmakefrien...
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六年級英語作文:happy day600字
Thismorning,Igotupearly,Idressedfirst,thenImadethequilt,thenIwenttobrushmyteeth.Whenyoubrushyourteeth,yourmouthiscoveredwithwhiteandwhitebubbles,likeabeardwithwhiteflowers.IfyouputonaSantahatlikeSantaClaus.Afterbrushingmyteeth,Igotobreakfas...
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六年級英語作文:english friend200字
myenglishfriendnameisjim.heisten,hisfamilyinlondon,heandhisfamilymembercomesourchinatohasacosin,henameisqianyuhiisoniyfouryearsold,buthehasalotofqu......
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