09年會考英語寫作突破:完形填空作文
完型填空 (補全短文)
"三遍法":第一遍瞭解大意;第二遍作題;第三遍檢查確認
例題:
Alex ___1___ in a factory in a big town. He liked ____2____ very much, and was very good at it. Whenever he was free, he went down to the small ___3___ behind the factory and tried to catch some fish, but there were very ___4____ there, because the water of the river was dirty.. then one summer he went to the seaside during his holidays and ___5__ at a small, cheap hotel.
"I've never fished in the sea ____6___," he thought. "It will be rather different from fishing in our river."
On the first day he ____7____ a lot of fish and was very ____8___. He gave them to he hotel, and they ____9___ them for all the persons at the hotel, and they enjoyed them very much. After that, he did this every day. But when he got his bill at the ____10____ of his holidays, he saw on it "For oil to fry fish (7days): 14 dollars."
答案:1. worked 2. fishing 3. river 4. few ed 6. before
7. caught y/pleased/glad 9. cooked 10. end
3.短文寫作
短文寫作評分標準
評分標準:
第一檔:(15分-13分)符合題目要求,整篇表達清楚,語法無誤,詞彙拼寫正確,卷面整潔。
第二檔:(12分-10分)符合題目要求,整篇表達清楚,語法有少量錯誤,少量拼寫錯誤,卷面欠整潔。
第三檔:(9分-6分)基本符合題目要求,漏掉若干關鍵詞,超出了題目限制,整篇表達基本清楚,語言有部分錯誤。
第四檔:(3分-5分) 只能寫出題目要求的一兩個要點;只有個別句子能看懂,語法、詞彙錯誤很多。
第五檔:(1分-2分)只寫出了符合題意的若干單詞。
寫作要求: 符合題意;邏輯通暢;語法單詞正確;卷面清潔。
寫作的難題--寫作的步驟
篇--段--句--詞
1."篇" 明確主題
2."段" 構建結構
運用"提綱"
提綱案例
《我最喜愛的老師》
篇 主題:
段 提綱: 1. 老師基本信息介紹
a. 年齡
b. 相貌
c. 所授科目
d. …
a. 時間 b. 地點 c. 事情的經過 d. 關鍵詞 shy; encourage
3.我對老師的評價
關鍵詞:enjoy his class; like
3. "句" 填充內容
多用短句(簡單句),慎用長句(並列句/複合句/並列複合句)
文中參雜若干語法正確的長句能夠成為亮點並得到加分。
短句為主,輔之於長句。
句子的完整、時態、人稱、單複數、以及動詞的變形。
修辭
比喻 像…
be like The house is like a tank.
He is like a panda.
as… as… I am as hungry as a wolf.
The teacher is as busy as a bee.
He is as strong as a horse.
誇張 I am the luckiest boy in the world to have such a nice teacher.
擬人 The sky is smiling with beautiful sunshine.
4."詞"
可分為 "一般詞彙" 和 "具體詞彙"
一般詞彙 He is a good man. good
→ 具體詞彙 honest; diligent; hardworking; kind; nice; warmhearted; brave; selfless.
"一般描寫" 和 "具體描寫"
一般描寫 She is very beautiful.
→ 具體描寫 She is very beautiful. She has dark hair, big shining eyes, and pretty face.
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