Spring is here400字作文
Spring is everywhere, as long as we feel. Spring, green tree change. The grass is green and the flowers are open. There are red yellow powder flowers, scrambling to open. In the suburb, some children fly kites. In the garden, there are a lot of flowers. But there is no tall tree. Some weeds, from the earth in their heads. Look at the wonderful world, secretly happy. Spring is wonderful.I like spring.
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Spring is everywhere. In spring, trees and grass begin to turn green. The flowers start to the suburb, some children fly kites. In the garden, there are a lot of beautiful and colorful flowers. Spring is wonderful.I like spring.
修改老師:Crystal 老師
國一:思靈
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國一英語作文:我的生活方式450字
Peoplearedifferent,solifestylesaredifferent.Mylifestyleisprettygood.Doyouwanttoknow?Well,letmetellyou.Ioftenexercise,usuallywhenIhaveaP.Eclass.Iliketodrinkcola,anddrinkittwoorthreetimesaweek.Idon'tlikecoffee,soIneverdrinkit,it'sawful.Sure,I...
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Conditions can be created200字
Ifyouhaveawish,bepositiveaboutit,don'talwayswait,don'talwaysfindreasonsfornottrying,oryouwillneverachieveyourwishes.Infact,theconditionsforsuccesscanbecreated.Onceyouhaveit,actonit!Remember:youcancreateconditionsforyourwishes....
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國一英語作文:very surprised550字
Motheristhemostimportantpersontous.NowpeoplecelebrateMother’sDayeveryyear.Ithasbecomemoreandmorepopular.ThisdayisonthesecondSundayinMay.Onthatday,childrenoftensendtheirmotherflowerstoexpresstheirlove.Andsomechildrenmakesmallgiftsfortheirmo...
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國一英語作文:時間的分配1500字
Maybeyoualwaysask"HowcanIgetmoreandmoretime?"Now,Icantellyouastory.可能你們總是會問:“我如何能得到更多的時間?”現在,讓我來給你講個故事吧。Onceuponatime,thereweremanypeopleinavillagewhichnamed"goldtime".Andtherewasanoldmaninthevillage.Villagers...
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