會考英語作文範文及評析:看圖作文1
【習作要求】
看圖寫話
根據所給圖示,以"Wang Lei's Busy Day"為題,寫一篇不少於50字的短文,內容必須符合圖意,語意連貫,句式規範,字跡工整。(正文第一句已給出)
Wang Lei's Busy Day
It was March 8th yesterday.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
【參考範文】
It was March 8th yesterday. It was Women's Day. Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother. He went shopping and bought much food. Then he cleaned the room. He did his best to do some cooking. When his mother came back after work, she was very happy. Wang Lei was very tired, but he felt pleased. (58個詞)
【名師點評】
先"看準題意":題目是Wang Lei's Busy Day。寫作要圍繞王雷一天中所忙碌的事情的順序展開。描述昨天的事應該用過去時。從題意理解中即可"規範格式":本文用記敍文格式去寫。再"按點組句":
(1)3月8日為婦女節。→It was Women's Day.
(2)王雷去商店購物。→Wang Lei went shopping and bought much food.
(3)王雷打掃衞生。→He cleaned the room.
(4)他燒飯。母親回家很高興。→He did the cooking. When his mother came back, she was very happy.
完成組句後,"連句成段",可加上句子間的銜接句子。如在(1)與(2)之間可加上Wang Lei wanted to do something for his mother.
在最後可再談王雷一天的感受:He was very tired, but he felt happy.把這些句子連成段後,最後"通篇潤色"。
-
會考半命題作文:樂曲讓我陶醉650字
靜靜的夜晚,我站在窗前,把心情放在吹拂的涼風裏,任憑滿天星辰擦亮我暗淡的記憶。我帶上耳機,按下play鍵,聽着那自己最鍾愛的樂曲。這夜,贈人以思考的氛圍,這樂曲,贈人以夢境的温柔。我閉上雙眼,一切煩惱隨風流逝,只有樂曲使我遐想:我那高高的山樑後面,是家鄉那一片可愛的秋...
-
會考滿分作文得分技巧800字
作文成績的優劣關係到語文學科成績的高低,考生要想奪取會考語文高分,必須首先要奪取作文高分。那麼如何奪取會考作文高分呢?我們不妨從以下幾點做起:【技巧一】:作文成績看字跡,得分要素是第一任何形式的作文考試,閲卷老師打分時,第一眼,看的是字跡。因此,寫作文必須要把...
-
德州會考擴寫作文範文:珍惜這段灼熱年華
點點的歡笑,淡淡的憂傷,飛揚的青春,用歌聲唱響十六歲的灼熱年華,我的青春,我做主。——題記懵懂的歲月已悄然逝去,當初天真的我們已經成為過去。16歲告別無知,迎來絢麗多彩的一條路,那條路叫青春!九月的太陽將大地烤得滾燙,籃球場上兩排整齊的樹木亦如我們的隊伍。烈日當...
-
北京會考作文“好奇”詳細解析
寫作,最重要的不是技巧與方法,而是你的情感與思想,你是否用心體察生活中的人與事,你是否積極應對成長中的困惑與艱難,你是否真心待人,你是否求知若渴。【原題呈現】好奇,指的是對不瞭解的事物感到新奇,發生興趣。有人對星空的奧祕感到好奇,於是就去觀察探究;有人對小人國...