At the seaside300字作文
My family and I went to the seaside dad went fishing in the mum unber the read a book. My uncle ate ice consins ate brothers nade a sters basked on the sunny went swimming in the and I played were very happy.
修改后:
My family and I went to the seaside. My dad went fishing in the sea. My mum stayed underthe umbrella. She read a book. My uncle ate an ice cream. My consins ate bread. My brothers made a sandcastle. Mysisters bathed on the sunny beach. Mike went swimming in the sea. Kate and I played football. We were very happy.
修改老师:Crystal 老师
六年级:吕晓燕
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