[擁抱春天英語徵文]Spring In The Park800字作文
Spring is when life's alive in everything.I went to xiangshan park with my mather yesterday.T-he air is very clean and the sunshine is very warm.
The xiangshan park have apieceof grass.l like lying on the ground of the park in grass is very soft,andI love the feeling of lying on the ,I enjoy lying of the grass und-er the sun.
The park have many peach blossoms,ese poets often compare beautiful women to peach blo-ssoms in spring. Thewarm quick rains and sudden frothing of pink peach blossoms and dogwood dappl-ing with white stars the dark river swamp and far-off ,these peach blossoms were very beautiful. Under the big Tree, I fed the birdswith a happy birds were verylovely,and I very li-ke them. Yestreday,I have a good a good day!
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Spring is coming and everything begins to come back to life. It's time for go outing.I went to Xiangshan park with my mother air was very clean. The sun shone brightly and it was very warm.
In spring, l like lying on the grass in the park. The grass was very soft, andI enjoyed the feeling of lying on the grass, especially under the sun.
All the flowers in the park were blooming beautifully. Trees turned green. I heard birds singing happily. We had a picnic there. And I rode a bike, too.
I had a good time there. What a good day!
修改老師:Crystal 老師
國二:陳婧涵
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