WALKING IN SPRING900字作文
When you look around, you will find that the Spring is coming . In spring, the weather getting warmer, the days getting longer and everthing starts to grow.
I like this season, because it’s a good time for sightseeing. The sunshine is soft and warmth. Swallows fly back. The trees turn green and flowers come out. They are very beautiful, isn't it? Beautiful scenery to disperse us whiny.
Spring is not a bad season. Some farmers are busy scattering seed. The rivers formed by the melting of ice and snow provide water for irrigation. The fieldis full of energy and hope.
All persons should seek to become acquainted with the beauty in spring. This beauty is so comformable to our tender and noblest feelings, that it is painful to think of some people living in the midst of it and yet remaining almost blind to it.
Dear, keep walking in spring. Let the special of the moment help you discover new ways of tasting life’s niceness.
修改後:
When you look around, you will find that the spring is coming. In spring, the weather is getting warmer and warmer, and the days are getting longer. Everthing starts to grow.
I like spring, because it’s a good time for sightseeing. The sun shines brightly and warmly. Swallows fly back. The trees turn green and flowers come are very beautiful, aren't they?
Spring is a good season. Farmers are busy sowing seeds. Thefieldis full of energy and hope.
All people should go outside and enjoy the beautiful spring which can make people feelcomfortable and relax.
Let's go walking in spring, breathe the fresh air in spring and enjoy ourselves in spring.
修改老師:Crystal老師
高二:蔡梓微
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