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2013大學入學測驗英語作文預測(五):留言條

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  假設你是李華,星期天你要和你的同班同學李明一起去敬老院參加義務勞動,你去找他,但他沒有在家 ,你給他留言説明要求,內容如下:

  (1)9:30在學校門口集合;

  (2)帶勞動工具(洗衣粉、理髮工具、除草工具等);

  (3)自帶午飯,騎自行車前往。

  注意:

  (1)詞數100左右;(2)可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

  Dear Li Ming,

  ______________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________

    Li Hua

  【猜題理由】2010年大學入學測驗寫作題應該是學生較為熟悉的、身邊的與他們生活、學習密切相關的話題。因為大學入學測驗有一定的連續性,2010年有些省份仍可能採用應用文進行考查。

  【構思點撥】本題屬於提綱式要點作文,要求學生就所給內容寫一張留言條,是學生比較熟悉的題材,體現了英語學習應該注意實用性,生活化的原則。應注意下面幾點: (1)注意人稱,應該用第一人稱的形式給同學李明(第二人稱)寫便條:(2)注意時態的正確使用:從試題的內容上可以看出在表達要點上應用將來時;(3)注意恰當使用邏輯詞語,是各個要點間邏輯連貫,行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯,而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句,因此要仔細組織語言,合理安排結構。在語言方面,要特別注意簡潔明瞭,開門見山。

  【參考範文

  Dear Li Ming,

  This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, we'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we'll stay there for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, you'll phone me at once.

    Li Hua

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