At the seaside300字作文

My family and I went to the seaside dad went fishing in the mum unber the read a book. My uncle ate ice consins ate brothers nade a sters basked on the sunny went swimming in the and I played were very happy.

修改後：
My family and I went to the seaside. My dad went fishing in the sea. My mum stayed underthe umbrella. She read a book. My uncle ate an ice cream. My consins ate bread. My brothers made a sandcastle. Mysisters bathed on the sunny beach. Mike went swimming in the sea. Kate and I played football. We were very happy.

修改老師：Crystal 老師

六年級:呂曉燕