My famliy250字作文
I have a famliy. They are my father,my mother and me. My father is a doctor. He goes to work by bus. My mother is a factory worker. She goes to work by bike.I am a student.I go to school on foot.
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I have a happy famliy. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a doctor. He goes to work by bus. My mother is a factory worker. She goes to work by bike. I am a student. I go to school on foot. I love my family.
修改教師: Crystal老師
六年級:靜純
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Wonderful dream400字
Yesterdaynight,Imadeadream.Dreamofatalkingdogitsays:"areyouprimaryschool?"Isay:"yes!""Canyouhelpmetoputonthevolcanobagoff?"Itsaid:"ok,youcometome."Bounded,flewintothevolcano,mybackschoolbag,lookdown,wow!Sohigh!Thefollowingisreallybeautiful!...
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Beloved toy250字
Thisafternoon,motherboughtmeatoycalledhappylittlefarm,thereisashovel,ladybeetle,scissors,bottleandapottedflower.Motherletmetakethehappylittlefarmoutplaywithchildrenzeze,zezeaskedIboughtthistoyfromthat,Iboughtitsaysonthesquare.Zezealsolethis...
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六年級英語作文:Spring 250字大綱
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六年級英語作文:hobbies1200字
Everyonehastheirownhobbies,somelikedancing,somelikesinging,somelikepainting,andmyhobbyisreading.Iamathomeaslongastherewillbeatimeintotheoceanofthebook,mymotherassoonasIseeyou,willsay:"dark,nerd,andreadit!"Sometimes,inordertoread,Ievensleepa...
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